Prompt Run Results

Project: Overall Essay Marker V1

Completed
Run Summary
Prompt Version:
v1 - AI Instructions For Essay Analysis V1
AI Model:
Gemini 2.5 Pro
Duration:
37s
Created:
2026-02-01 00:43
Temperature:
0.0
Max Response Tokens:
8,192
Top-K:
1
Top-P:
Not set
Thinking Configuration:
8192 tokens

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Total Items

1

Successful

0

Failed

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Processed

Total Tokens: 8,230
Prompt Tokens: 4,861
Response Tokens: 596
Thoughts Tokens: 2,773
Avg Log Probability: 47.03%
Safety Ratings: N/A
Evaluation Summary

Field-by-field evaluation of generated vs expected output

Field Path Type & Match Criterion Total Matches Match Rate Precision Recall F1 Similarity
overall.score exact-match 1 1 100.0%
Responses for the Golden Items (1)

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Angeline Business 100.0% · 1/1 fields matched
8,230 tokens
Field & Match Criterion Expected Output Generated Output Evaluation Metrics
body.paragraphs.feedback
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The content of your body paragraphs is good, as you thoughtfully engage with the prompts to argue that factors like safety and purpose are integral to long-term business success. However, the structure is poor and significantly weakens your essay. The paragraphs do not consistently follow the TEEL (Topic, Evidence, Elaboration, Link) structure. For instance, your second paragraph introduces two separate ideas (technology and meritocracy) and functions more as a setup than a focused argument. To improve, ensure each body paragraph begins with a single, clear topic sentence that presents an argument supporting your main contention. Follow this with evidence, a detailed elaboration on the logic of your argument, and a strong linking sentence that connects the paragraph's point back to your overall thesis.
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body.paragraphs.score
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Poor
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conclusion.feedback
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The content of your final paragraph is excellent. It provides a sophisticated and powerful concluding thought that effectively synthesises the essay's core themes of technology, merit, and inclusion into a humane vision of success. However, its structure is unconventional as it functions as both a final body paragraph and a conclusion. While the concluding statement is strong, a dedicated conclusion should ideally not introduce new argumentative layers. For a higher score, it is better to have a distinct conclusion that clearly restates your main contention and briefly summarises the arguments you have already made, providing a definitive end to your essay.
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conclusion.score
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Good
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introduction.feedback
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Your introduction is structured perfectly. You begin with an engaging contextual hook that sets the scene of the modern business world, followed by a clear and insightful contention that a sole focus on profit undermines long-term success. You then effectively summarise the arguments you will explore. The paragraph is concise, logical, and provides the reader with a clear roadmap for the rest of the essay. The content is also strong, as your contention directly and thoughtfully addresses the tension within the provided prompts.
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introduction.score
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Excellent
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overall.feedback
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This essay has a strong foundation with an excellent introduction and thoughtful ideas, but its potential is held back by significant structural weaknesses in the body and conclusion. Your contention is clear and you effectively synthesise the prompts. The main area for improvement is structure. You should focus on implementing the TEEL structure for your body paragraphs, ensuring each one is a distinct, self-contained argument. Additionally, create a dedicated conclusion that summarises your points and restates your thesis, rather than blending it with your final argument. Mastering this structure will allow your strong analytical content to be presented with greater clarity and impact, elevating your essays from 'Okay' to 'Excellent'.
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overall.score
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Match: Exact equality
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Okay
Exact Match
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Finish Reason:
STOP
Avg Log Probability:
47.03%
Safety Rating:
N/A

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